Tuesday, October 7, 2014

Update #1

The facts below are about:
Benefits of Designer Babies on Human


Original paragraph:
Although there are many questions of if genetically modifying babies is ethical and for the moral reason, there are many positives to this type of treatment:
    Installs a better understanding of genetics for genealogists and biologists.
    Increases human life span up to 30 years.
    Prevents genetic diseases such as down syndrome, Alzheimer’s, Huntington’s Disease, Spinal Muscular Atrophy, and many others.

 Key ideas:
·      There are many positives to this type of treatment
·      Prevents genetic diseases such as down syndrome, Alzheimer’s, Huntington’s Disease, Spinal Muscular Atrophy, and many others.

Source in MLA:
"The Pros and Cons of Designer Babies." The Ethics of Designer Babies. N.p., 28 Apr. 2013. Web. 7 Oct. 2014.



Paraphrasing:

Designer Babies are babies that have been genetically selected in order to eliminate certain disabilities, or to make sure that a specific gene is present. There are many benefits of this kind of treatment such as it can improve your human life range up to 30 years old, it can prevent genetic diseases like down syndrome and Spinal Muscular Atrophy. The numbers of children in this world will increase, it will allow parents to give their child a healthy and happy life and it allows prospective parents to give their genes to their child.

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